It is said that many married pairs in every corner of the world tend to avoid having children, and this trend has triggered both merits and drawbacks.
Refusing to give birth brings couples loads of benefits on account of some reasons. Firstly, this phenomenon is attributable to the decrease in the number of residents in a nation; as a result, overpopulation can be tackled. In addition, the fewer citizens a country has, the less pollution the environment bears. Secondly, people will not be under economic pressure, with no money being allocated to school or other children's services. A telling example is the increase in the tuition that parents have to pay for their children, so not giving birth may let them free of this amount of money.
On the other hand, such a fall in the number of young individuals also causes lots of problems to the country and residents. The first disadvantage is the lack of workforce because many occupations require flexible and creative thinking which can only be seen in the young generation. Moreover, the number of senior citizens might cause a financial burden, for the government has to spend money on services for the old such as insurance, entertainment while the number of young people is not enough to meet that standard. The second negative aspect of not having children is the loneliness that people have to face when they get older. Having no children, individuals have to do anything themselves and are on the verge of depression. For example, a hospital has shown that most of the old people having depression do not have children.
In conclusion, having no children has both positive and negative effects on an individual's life, but this situation also depends on the circumstances of each family.
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 73
- The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
- The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles 84
- Governments around the world are spending billions in support of space programs This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 73
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94576271186 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7778538979 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.758144564 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238294837419 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788739024023 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615649193094 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139268225238 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274599175629 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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