The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, instead of using face-to-face communication, many people choose online conversation using social media platforms. It seems to me that the benefits of digital technologies bring to society more overshadowed than their drawbacks.
In term of the advantages, social media turn people's lives into a convenient life. For student abroad, it bring distant people together, connect people between two different countries. In addition, that mean of communication not only become a tool that help people exchange and share useful infomation and ideas, it but also is the place where users share their emotion to alleviate stress and remove their shyness, barriers of communication. Especially, young peiple can take in the large amount of knowledge about the world or the lessson in class by only a click on the internet. For example, when I get a trouble in my essay because of the lack of evidences, I can search more example or video on Tiktok or Google to get more knowledge and complete fastly my essay.
Despite the above benefits, I also believe that when it comes to communication, social media does more harm than good. The overuse of social media negatively affect mental health, physical health and personally. For example, when young people spend too much time browsing the internet, they will be addicted and their behavior or personality will be impacted by offensive videos and comments. Especially, social media's users can make a bad habit of putiing off their task and ignoring their family, friends and everything around them.
In conclusion, for the reasons metioned above, I am of the opinion that the positive affects that social media has on our communication are overweighed by the adverse impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...convenient life. For student abroad, it bring distant people together, connect people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13427561837 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80230951285 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3899309512 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190607497914 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720386896707 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785938292912 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126543549766 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802980832802 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.