Children these days spend a lot of time apart from their parents because in many homes, both parents work.
What problems can be caused by this?
What are some ways to support such children ?
It is true that kids are becoming more separated from their family, who have both parents coping with their professions every day. While it is a serious problem, it can be solved by offering useful activities and conditions to help them get more sociable and not be isolated.
The main cause of this children's separation is that their parents have to take a lot of time for their work to get high income and success in hustle society.
The living condition nowadays is more and more increasing, so it requires the amount of finance enough to afford the life means. Furthermore, a part of parents dream to have achievement in their occupations, thus they have to invest more time on it and lead their children to become alone and cause abnormal emotions. For example, on a daily basis, the adults spend their efforts in company, just have a bit of time for their kids at night after their work, resulting in less interaction at home between the family members and make them isolated.
However, there are remedies to this problem, one of the ways to tackle it is to sponsor interesting activities and create advantageous conditions for them to mitigate their time alone and broaden the connection between children and society. Throughout activities children can have opportunities to experience and link with other people, widening their horizon. In addition, trying to spend time with childrens via some online channels to expand communication and interaction between the family members. In fact, instead of staying at home for long hours, children which take part in entertain courses to help them have a playground to exchange and interact with their friends and alleviate the alone time, otherwise, parents should make a bit of time to talk with them via chit - chat channels to conscious about their status quo and rising the interaction with them.
To sum up, it is obvious that childrens are isolated when their parents make a lot of time for their work. Nevertheless, the issue can be resolved by participating in some meaningful activities and communicating more through online channels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in fact, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01714285714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72602680639 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505714285714 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3805134016 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31205952313 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132078924498 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696667945023 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206517999908 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396433538173 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.