People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Globalization has been popularly accepted all over the world because of the technological advancements and enhancements in the transportation system. The advantages certainly outweigh the disadvantages of the developmental factors and in this essay, I will explain my view with supporting examples.
To commence with, technology has broadened the spectrum of mass media communication and transportation. People have made the maximum out of it. Nowadays, people can connect to the each other through internet since few decades. The Information Technology industry has been booming recently.
For instance, as per statistics 89 percent of world population has been using internet. Besides, Multiples businesses are rising using mass medias and transportation services. However, avoiding such services in the current times is impractical.
The effects are less proportionate as compared to the boon but this cannot be ignored. Due to such advances, people have started to migrate to anywhere in the world making brain drain to developed countries. Many developing countries have been highly impacted with such liberal ideas. For example, 40 percent of resources travel overseas to change a better lifestyle. Additionally, the drastic increase in air pollution and sound pollution because of new transportation system. To exemplify, The air quality is unhealthy in Asian continental countries due to irreponsibily usage of cars and other vehicles.
To sum up, although there are few negative impacts causing environmenal issues, the availabilty and easiness to prosper individual definitely has more positive impacts of developmental factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84232365145 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27747251254 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651452282158 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5436724862 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0625 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251031592592 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648495004977 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596118029983 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108650247843 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732499685399 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.0 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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