Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.
Undeniably, animals are as vital as human beings and trees for our ecosystem due to numerous reasons. However, nowadays it is observed that more trials are done on animals than before which is impacting the nature drastically. I partly support the notion of ceasing animal experimenting and will elaborate on my viewpoint in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, animals are a precious gift of nature and human beings should not harm them for their personal benefits. The trials done on animals leads to more unnatural deaths as chemicals consumed by them are usually toxic. According to a recent survey report of India, around 200 rabbits died during experiment of covid medicine on them which is considerably a high number according to reports. Not only this, but also some animals become diseased for their entire life and that disease pass on to their younger generations. For instance, in one of the experiments done on baby Tigress recently, it is found that she was suffering from cancer because her ancestors were prone to animal testing back then.
On the flip side, there subsists various reasons to support animal testing. Undoubtedly, research has to be done on some living being so that scientists can come to a conclusion and a verified product can be released in to the markets. Therefore, trials on animals are crucial so that many human lives can be saved in the future. For example, medicine tested on 100 mouse can help to save billions of people around the world. Additionally, some animals are huge in number, therefore even if we lose some of them, it will not impact their count and biodiversity adversely.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that animal testing should be stopped right away as every life is important for this nature. Animals have the equal right to survive as humans and no one should snatch it form them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'mouse' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'mice'.
Suggestion: mice
...re. For example, medicine tested on 100 mouse can help to save billions of people aro...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: huge
...e world. Additionally, some animals are huge in number, therefore even if we lose some of them...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forms'?
Suggestion: forms
...e as humans and no one should snatch it form them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94888178914 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62300903207 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7381162072 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159234490148 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548003044306 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023445245621 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995333358126 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123323574114 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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