The rise in the crime rate presents a major concern for today’s society. The question of whether nature or nurture is the main trigger for crimes remains a topic of debate. Although people’s nature can also be a contributing factor, I would agrue that surroundings has a more profound impact on human’s behaviours.
Human’s nature is thought to be a factor causing people to commit crime. According to to many proffesional geneticists, human characteristics are inherited form both parents. It means that children have father or mother who used to serve a prison sentence are more predisposed to comitting crimes. Moreover, studies reveal that a majority of serious murder or sexual criminals committing offences on order to satisfy their needs or violent personal trait. Such guilty actions are unplanned and their target victims can be randomly picked anywhere.
I hold an opinion that that illegal behaviours mainly come from human’s surroundings. The likelihood of people living in poverty committing crime is significantly high. Especially in the world crisis of COVID-19 at this time, many people have become unemployed and crime rates are rising in the most vunerable areas in the world. In addition, children raised in a dysfuntional family tend to solve conflicts by violence. Witnessing many arguments and violence during their formative years plays an important role in forming children’s characteristics when they grow up. These children believe that the most effective way to tackle problems and express themselves is using violent methods.
In conclusion, the motive of crimes is influenced by many elements including internal and external factors, but it seems to me that the environment is the leading factor causing that illegal behaviours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...using people to commit crime. According to to many proffesional geneticists, human ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5201793722 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95989263778 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681614349776 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0230193436 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.583333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138026203144 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502796088548 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691067488471 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863247726364 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208996022197 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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