Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?
Fossil fuels are one of the primary sources of producing energy. This essay will take a look on how to protect these sources and find some replacements for the fossil fuels.
Fossil fuels is a very important source to produce some of the life essentials as the electricity or powering industries that’s helps the mankind in their daily use. Although, Fossil fuels are found in large numbers in the sea depth but one day it will vanish due to our high usage of it. So, we have to preserve these sources to our next generations. As an example, We have to put a limit on the amount of fossil fuels we can mine through the year.
Meanwhile, We have to put some restrictions and penalties on company’s who break these rules.
There are so many alternative ways that generate energy than fossil fuels as the power of electricity as some countries started to choose electricity as their main source of power over the fossil fuels. Also, we can use power of winds to produce energy. its less cheaper than the process of mining the fossil fuels. As a country all you need is to use wind mills that can produce energy and electricity together.as an example a country like brazil started to use wind power rather than using fossil fuels to produce energy and to generate electricity and they saved more than 15 million dollars only in one year by using the wind mills method. also, they avoided pollution caused by the fossil fuels mining method.
In conclusion, the world can’t rely on the fossil fuels only because it can be depleted one day and there are alternative ways we can use as the wind power that are more cheaper and eco friendly than the fossil fuels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Suggestion: Its
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Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less cheap'?
Suggestion: less cheap
...e power of winds to produce energy. its less cheaper than the process of mining the fossil f...
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Suggestion: Also
...ne year by using the wind mills method. also, they avoided pollution caused by the f...
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Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...s we can use as the wind power that are more cheaper and eco friendly than the fossil fuels....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62626262626 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40537457438 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47138047138 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3106392071 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466701769412 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187583357914 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739665926169 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276323011399 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922685317294 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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