Should money be spent on space exploration?
A much debated issue these days is whether money should be spent on space exploration or not. Some people accord with the idea, while others have contrary view, and they believe that exploring space is a waste of money and there are more urgent needs to be addressed on earth, such as reducing poverty and preventing environmental destruction.
Those who endorse this view, have following view points. First of all, many of the technologies we take for granted today were originated thanks to space research. Take satellite technology, for example, which we depend on for broadcasting and weather ...
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