Environmental damage is a problem in most countries.
What is the cause of this damage?
What should be done about this problem?
In some countries, the issue of environmental devastation is alarmingly worrying. This problem results from numerous reasons from humans. This essay, in particular, will explain the core factors leading to natural destruction and give possible solutions in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the requirement of fostering a national economy contributes to the damage to the environment through the industrialization era. The rapid growth of plants in some regions, which need a considerable hectare of land, leads to serious deforestation. Moreover, overpopulation issues raising concerns for necessities and habitats can require exploiting natural resources. For instance, the requirement of growing sufficient food results in cutting down plants and forests rigorously.
There are many ways for both organizations and individuals to clinch natural devastation. If the proper policy is implemented to sue activities damaging natural resources, the consequence of environmental deterioration will not be worsened. Particularly, the financial tax applied on products made from natural resources such as wood can mitigate over-exploitation. In addition, by enhancing awareness about nature among the citizens entrepreneurs can restrict activities causing harm to the environment. This includes widespread knowledge about consequences and the reality of the way the environment was devastated.
In conclusion, natural deterioration is a result of industrialization and the excessive amount of people residing on land. However, the situation could be improved if suitable laws protecting nature are conducted and activities are launched to raise understanding about environmental issues in public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17721518987 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57775554003 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6363159736 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160717316858 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508710402245 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510102295386 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910544129199 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484805391908 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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