“Your family and friends are encouraging you to buy a new car. What are some benefits and downsides of purchasing a brand new vehicle? Explain your thoughts using examples.”
Cars are one of the most popular vehicles in the world. Buying a car is the purpose and dream of many people. Purchasing a new vehicle presents many problems, but there are also benefits to it.
First and foremost, cars or other vehicles bring benefits to the owner. Latest vehicles are likely to be equipped to the most advanced technology. Since multimedia and navigation interfaces are continuosly evolving and improving, owning a vehicle will make people’s lives easier and more relaxed. People are able to drive longer distance and get comfortabe in the car thanks to the add-on features including fuel efficiency and speed limit. Moreover, new cars come with a warranty, which creates peace of mind for customers. Most new vehicles will have very minimal repairs within the first few years, the guarantee will help customers grasp their benefits and not waste it. For example, the Toyota sent notices via mail such as airbag failure or engine defect to the customer. In addition, new cars are cleaner than the one is used. In the new car, there are no stains, wears and tears. Meanwhile, used cars can have creases on the interior or scratches outside the car. Indeed, new vehicles bring latest technology, peace of mind and cleanliness to the customers.
Besides, new vehicles also bring many issues to the users. The owner has to pay higher fee if they buy a brand new one than buying a second-hand car. When a consumer purchases a new car, he or she is obligated to pay service fees such as insurance cost or registration fee. Moreover, some people assume that insurance companies apply a higher cost for used car’s owners because used cars are old and more likely to cause accidents. However, car insurance premium is usualy higher for new car owner since modern car apply latest technology, money to replace broken part cost an arm and a leg. Furthermore, the price of the new car is higher than an old one. Since car technology increased quickly, the cost of used cars is also significantly reduced. For example, in 2020, the Honda Civic cost three times higher than in 2018. Therefore, not everyone can afford a new car. Finally, new vehicles are risky to the owner. New vehicles use many newly tested technologies, which bring many risks to users if they have problems. Specifically, if a car is equipped with automatic braking system, it has to work correctly otherwise accident will occur. For instance, in Arizona, the self-driving car crashed a pedestrian without braking before the accident. Therefore, the community raised a concern about the safety of self-driving cars. By and large, the user has to pay higher fee, more expensive price and more risky when owning a brand new vehicle.
In conclusion, new vehicles bring both benefits and downside for the customers. They can approach modern technology, peace of mind and unstained car. However, they have to face against higher fee, pricey vehicle and unsafe journey.
- Your family and friends are encouraging you to buy a new car What are some benefits and downsides of purchasing a brand new vehicle Explain your thoughts using examples 73
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Comments
Reflecting on my first car…
Reflecting on my first car purchase, it's remarkable how it stood the test of time. Now, as I explore various platforms for potential replacements, I find myself drawn to options that resonate with my driving style. Among them, the link to the RAV4 lineup at VIDI seems particularly promising. However, while personal preference plays a significant role, reliability remains a non-negotiable aspect worth careful consideration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Latest'.
Suggestion: The Latest
...r vehicles bring benefits to the owner. Latest vehicles are likely to be equipped to t...
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Line 3, column 994, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'bring the latest'.
Suggestion: bring the latest
...s outside the car. Indeed, new vehicles bring latest technology, peace of mind and cleanline...
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Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'apply the latest'.
Suggestion: apply the latest
...gher for new car owner since modern car apply latest technology, money to replace broken par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2459.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95766129032 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59672958161 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489919354839 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.0 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2249523843 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.84375 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78125 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290152256062 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917953345406 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563095764544 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200483876948 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355100693396 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.