It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The idea is that saving money for the future is very necessary, especially for young people as they have the ability to earn more money than the older. Personally, I totally agree that this is a good idea.
To begin with, using a large amount of money without preserving it can be negative in some ways. One of the most important problems is that people might have nothing to eat when they are not able to earn money due to some reasons. For example, nowadays, because of the economic depression, there is a number of residents has retired from their work in some countries. Since they use money without spending it, they might not have the ability to earn money, so they cannot maintain their daily lives.
At the same time, saving money for the future can have several benefits. Firstly, people do not worry about money when in an emergency situation. For instance, during the COVID-19 pandemic, since the laws about taking a gap while talking to others are promulgated by the government, employers are not allowed to go to work. As a result, residents cannot make money during the pandemic but they still have the ability to maintain their lives if they have awareness of saving money before. Secondly, this is very useful for old people. As people become older, they are likely to have more illness and their fitness decline than before. In order to cure diseases, these people must have money to pay for doctors and medicines. Therefore, money is considerably important as it can solve several problems which happen to older people.
In conclusion, due to some advantages such as maintaining daily life and curing diseases, I strongly agree with the issue that saving money is important for all people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80677966102 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41371642985 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8471405228 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315559780669 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118270605546 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650434442654 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223693035206 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611731573577 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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