The maps below shown an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the current area in the town of Norbition and its development plan in the future.
It is obvious that the main square will not change in the new design but add some new path ways to this place. All of the factories replaced with housings and in the middle of the town get crowd in the future plan.
As can be seen, there is not any change in the border of the city and its wide do not change. In the developed plan there is not any factory and all of them omitted but a school, playground, medical center, and shops add in new version of town which to lasted facilities are near the middle square. Although the middle center doesn’t change three new paths add that end to this place and one of them pass the river in the farmland which located a housing there and another way leads to school. The last way link to a small squire that add below the origin squire in the planned future development. Six housing areas constructed around the town. There is new facilities that the farmland section can use them and construct a path that link the town and farmland to each other.
In conclusion, the new plan of the town has more facilities and path ways that seems it is better than before scheme.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...t add some new path ways to this place. All of the factories replaced with housings and in...
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Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are new facilities'?
Suggestion: There are new facilities
...sing areas constructed around the town. There is new facilities that the farmland section can use them ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37885462555 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23231990299 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502202643172 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9267181085 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141048393481 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703982308868 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596636523404 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112583805481 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564527560078 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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