The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps depict an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.
Overall, the industrial area is currently located opposite to a nearby town, separated from a farmland by a river. According to the future scheme, there will be several changes to the area that will focus on the center of the mentioned location.
Currently a branch of the main road goes directly into the Norbiton industrial area, circulating the central part of the section, then flowing straight forwards to the right. A number of factories surround the direction of these road routes, with three around the left of the central circular point, and other five along the right branch of the road.
Regarding the planned future development, the Norbiton industrial area will adapt the majority of modifications at its centre. The main road will circulate at the entrance to the industrial area, which will also form a crosspoint among three divided branches from the road. Shops and a medical centre will be set up on either side along the entrance route. The central circle will be remained, yet from which two other routes will divide. One of these will direct to the left, surrounded with a group of residences in the North and the West. Another will separate the river in half, ended by a housing construction, while another at a smaller size along its left side. Additionally, the remained right road branch will give a direction to a playground that will be just below the river. Three accommodations will cover both sides of the route, and a school will inhabit the end of the given road branch.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61152222069 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514492753623 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9339881203 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14418388343 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720230056463 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1073047891 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157893476573 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138734853635 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.