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In our modernized society, we have witnessed a lot of shifts in the daily life especially in term of learning. According to the figure, online earning is one of the most popular kinds of study that young people are into following. But what are the benefits and the drawbacks of this trend?
On one hand, online education has many valuable advantages. Firstly, it give us a lot of flexibility in our schedules and spend less money in our education. We will study our desired courses and subjects at our own pace. This is a fantastic opportunity for learners to study lots of beneficial skills such as: time-management skills, sefl-discipline skills… and expend their experience while remaining in the comfort of their own home. As a result, distance learning is both cost-effective and time-efficient. The second benefit of this topic is that it provides a highly personalized learning environment. Learners can adjust their studying pace according to their ability and review the lecture as many times as necessary. It helps improve learning efficiency, especially for difficult subjects or large amounts of knowledge. In addition, online learning often combines multimedia including videos, images and interactive tests, making the content more vivid and easy to understand. Online learning platforms also allow learners to track their learning ptogress easily, remind them of class schedules and assignment deadlines, thereby helping them maintain motivation and study discipline. Futhermore, these important benefits play essential roles in student’s study.
On the other hand, online learning also brings us some disadvantages. The first inconvenience is that students will be isolated when study for a long time by using lots of modern devices like smart phones, laptops, computers,… Moreover, they can feel lonely and distant from their families, friends or even society. As a result, students wil be gained social skills, patience, disappointment management skills and competition skills at school. Another drawback is that online courses are unable to handle the tens of thousands of students who attempt to participate in discussions. Additionally, if it is designed for subjects that require practice, online learning can be challenging.
It can be concluded that online learning has both advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks. Learners should take the advantage of these beneficial benefits to make our study more effectively.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-06 | Thái Nhật Linh | 11 | view |
| 2024-06-13 | asmita acharya | 78 | view |
| 2024-01-16 | Agus Ismansyah | 67 | view |
| 2023-12-30 | mehjabin | 61 | view |
| 2023-12-29 | mehjabin | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rners to study lots of beneficial skills such as: time-management skills, sefl-di...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
...es like smart phones, laptops, computers,… Moreover, they can feel lonely and dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, while, even so, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50645994832 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07965243044 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576227390181 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9681678328 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8636363636 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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