Introduce myself

Grammar and spelling errors:
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I was born on the land shaped like the le...
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...in due to war but also full of heroism. I grew up in the largest city in the Meko...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gest city in the Mekong Delta, Can Tho. I am 18 years old and currently a student...
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...gest city in the Mekong Delta, Can Tho. I am 18 years old and currently a student...
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...o University. After introducing myself, I would like to share the story behind my...
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...during my graduation photo shoot, where I chose a new outfit: a suit. When I firs...
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...here I chose a new outfit: a suit. When I first tried it on, I felt it suited me,...
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...tfit: a suit. When I first tried it on, I felt it suited me, but something was st...
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...Luckily, on the day of the photo shoot, I found a pair of black sunglasses, which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 628.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18666666667 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45054189019 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 506.74238477 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1791326916 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844367796879 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041896967916 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110848957793 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844367796879 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 12.4159519038 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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