You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The two maps illustrate various changes Town Centre has undergone since the year 1990 to the present.
Overall, it is clear that the northern and Southern parts of the town have undergone significant transformations, with the most noticeable changes being the replacement of houses with apartment blocksas well as of mall shops with a shopping mall.
Regarding the transport infrastructure, the current Town centre has Smith street is converted into pedestrian route. The two walking zones which connect town Hall with one bank and Town Hall with apartment block have been esstablished.
Regarding the town facilities, currently there is a shopping mall built to the North of the Town centre where some small shops such ass Cafe, Butter's once stood. While houses to the south of the Green Street have been replaced by an appartment block, a TOwn Hall, Library, Park and Childcare center remain unchanged. In addition, the two banks to the East of the Town Centre have experienced a stability during the period given..
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iceable changes being the replacement of houses with apartment blocksas well as ...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...changes being the replacement of houses with apartment blocksas well as of mall ...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
... being the replacement of houses with apartment blocksas well as of mall shops with a s...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...n Hall with one bank and Town Hall with apartment block have been esstablished. Regardin...
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Line 4, column 427, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nced a stability during the period given..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15060240964 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74501223603 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.112977544 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157491704555 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876802851187 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043490006416 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108891632643 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502178902025 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.