You received a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suggested'.
Suggestion: suggested
...r looking for employment. I am strongly suggest you should go to get a job. Our frie...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Our friendship already over four years , I know your parents want you enrolling ...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and dream about open your own restaurant . Moreover, culinary skills are require m...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...taurant . Moreover, culinary skills are require more practical experiences rather than ...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...ting a better job in the past. Nowadays get a degree not equal to you can get a per...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ou must hear the news said the graduate students unemployment ratio are extremely high i...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...from school but it's limited. Hence,the only way to cumulative culinary experie...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l, however, you should start looking the kitchen hand position first owing to you...
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Line 9, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and learning from your senior colleagues , you will come out the idea about your f...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut the idea about your future restaurant and figure out how to running it. Lo...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'frankly', 'hence', 'however', 'look', 'moreover']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235741444867 0.220444632235 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.174904942966 0.167888034529 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0684410646388 0.0606518309736 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0494296577947 0.0506257000042 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.110266159696 0.118615021944 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0684410646388 0.107062808482 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0494296577947 0.041066498444 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62212429196 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380228136882 0.0385302599488 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00760456273764 0.00132118243153 576% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.06463878327 0.0714148451538 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266159695817 0.0191574576366 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00380228136882 0.00930345855455 41% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1347.0 1141.60824742 118% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.134020619 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98666666667 5.53046319177 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364444444444 0.284621296913 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284444444444 0.211203875043 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182222222222 0.133321485273 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0933333333333 0.0843313296314 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62212429196 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671111111111 0.622163163488 108% => OK
Word variations: 76.2282186082 62.8969750728 121% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 12.9587628866 116% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3229954712 44.7399317507 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 90.9928171075 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.4300151701 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.613754768223 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 7.22680412371 111% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.4444444444 37.5504026743 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.05681818182 1.13073093955 93% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401891832547 0.331212695627 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0711620182873 0.0927372745006 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0585111060626 0.0736520305886 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.631445409805 0.662452444078 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.236995582939 0.233577193048 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15831576613 0.122183219658 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121872207116 0.0765303033291 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.11298018194 0.110270004696 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100042443449 0.120535355502 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173464053692 0.120397337282 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155513783917 0.113578534861 137% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.54639175258 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.0824742268 185% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.62886597938 152% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 8.25773195876 157% => OK

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Rates: 72.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9