The migration of people to cities is one of the biggest problems facing the world's cities today. Discuss the main causes. What solutions could be used to tackle this situation
It is undeniable that since the industrial revolution, people from the countryside have been attracted to the cities . With the increasing number of people migrating, it has affected the world's cities and led to many problems. In this essay, I will discuss the causes and solutions.
There are main causes of people moving to cities from the rural areas. One is that there is more job potential in the cities than in the countryside. It is a fact that there are more business establishments and good positions for the workforce. Moreover, medical services in the urban areas are more efficient and have a higher number of hospital staff members compared to the local health centres in rural areas. These services are also more accessible to residents in the urban areas when they get sick than to those in the rural areas. Lastly, there is no doubt that technology works better in big cities. Wifi or the usage of the Internet works faster in big cities than in small towns.
However, there are a number of solutions to solve this migration problem that has resulted in negative effects on the world's cities. Perhaps one of the main solutions is to improve the quality of life in the countryside by offering better incentives and jobs from the government. Doing that helps attract more people to live in the rural areas. Besides that, offering a good health service to prolong life and encouraging people to retire in the countryside should also be considered. In order to do that, the media should be used to promote a healthy and stress-free life in the countryside.
To conclude, it is true that migration to larger cities is affected by urbanisation. However, some of the solutions have been discussed in this essay. If people are satisfied living in the countryside by providing them with their needs then I think migration will not be a big problem.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'i think', 'no doubt', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23595505618 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.151685393258 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10393258427 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0365168539326 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0252808988764 0.0437548338989 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13202247191 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0477528089888 0.0403226058552 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69960658244 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0421348314607 0.0326793684256 129% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11797752809 0.0861772015684 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0112359550562 0.021408717616 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00842696629213 0.011925033212 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1874.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 316.048096192 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83800623053 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342679127726 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227414330218 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171339563863 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1246105919 0.137316102897 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69960658244 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.037074148 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473520249221 0.56093040696 84% => OK
Word variations: 47.3847904224 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8333333333 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.829761039 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.111111111 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.814263465372 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 40.5747663551 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.94736842105 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516713720993 0.332605444948 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142497956547 0.102741220458 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0985167530965 0.0668466124924 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567679317875 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11694948714 0.148594505496 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240211246427 0.134430193775 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991055204937 0.0742795772207 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.482062535896 0.324371583561 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0767974899507 0.0638462369009 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409568091114 0.228012699653 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887415705668 0.058150111329 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9