In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations
The paper will be concerned with the possible problems and solutions on the middle lifespan that is increasing in modern civilization.
First of all, longitude of the increasing life expectance will affect on the price of taxes in society. Goverment expenses high amount of money to its citizen in the field of pension. In this case, Goverment will adopt higher taxes for paying retired people’s pensions due to the age of people that are living longer and also, duration of employees in their working period will be a greater while. Another point is that as much older workforce, a...
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Sentence: One consequence of this is Goverment can adopt rulls about the responsibility of young on looking after their relatives, even if sons or daughters have not provided with jobs yet and it causes another negotioations.
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Suggestion: Refer to another and negotioations
Sentence: One consequence of this is Goverment can adopt rulls about the responsibility of young on looking after their relatives, even if sons or daughters have not provided with jobs yet and it causes another negotioations.
Error: rulls Suggestion: rules
Error: negotioations Suggestion: negotiations
Sentence: Majority of foreign workers are ready to do even black works, however older workers's health can not allow to do phisical loading activities.
Error: phisical Suggestion: physical
Sentence: The world surely be better place to live in if everything will keep in middle gold and life expectancy is not exeption.
Error: exeption Suggestion: exception
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.123 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.024 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.059 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.295 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.031 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
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