Humans, since the beginning of time have evolved into intellectual creatures. Our minds have taken as fas as putting a man on the moon. But such accomplishment was aided by the invention of the space shuttle. As stated, mad will always be superior to machine since they are tools built by human minds. In fact this is absolutely true because it is the imagination of humans and countless studies and trial and errors they have to go through that makes machines exists today. Without the human mind, we will not be able to go places faster. Families around the world won't be able to communicate. Lastly, human wants live as long as they are now.
Imagine our lives without any mechanical transportation. We will merely rely in animals capabilities to transport us to places. Even this type of transportation has its limits. Animals are unable to travel far distances without rest and some can't even swim through waters. Hence, our reach will be limited. It is because of the human mind that allows us to invent the airplane, the car, or big ships. There was a need for improvement and the human mind with its critical thinking that allowed us to travel to other place faster and efficiently.
We also owe the improvement of ways we communicate to smart, inventors. For example, the telephone. People around the world are able to communicate with the simple touch of a button. Families around the world are even able to video chat with each other. They tell each other stories of their lives and allows them to be connected no matter how far they are. Before these inventions we had to rely on letters and telegrams. Life as it is became easier.
Lastly, the most important ways a brilliant mid have contributed to society is the improvement of our medical knowledge. For example, because of the trial and error of may doctors, we have improve ways to induce anesthesia, perform procedure safer. We also have ways now to detect cancer because of cat scan, or magnetic imaging. None of these would be possible if not for the human mind.
However, we also need to remember what the machines can do for humans which in some ways they can be seen as superior. For example, they can can calculate big numbers such as a calculator. They can store so many things in their memory such as a computer, while the human mind may forget. But, the main idea is that none of these things are possible if it weren't for the human mind.
It is true that machines may have made our lives easier but a machines functionality is owed to the great minds who have invented them. With the human mind's thirst to improve it is without a doubt that more advance machines will be invented in the future.
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88274336283 348% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
You may argue any topic in TLEP:
T: mean time. It works on time A, while it may not work on time B.
L: means location. It works on location A, while it may not work on location B.
E: mean events. It works on event A, while it may not work on event B.
P: mean people. It works on people A, while it may not work on people B.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
The first three arguments are talking about the advantages of technology which are not related to the topic.
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result: The human mind will always be superior to machines
reason: machines are only tools of human minds
now need to argue: is there a causation between the reason and result?
reason: Yes,
result: maybe, pay attention to the key words: 'always'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 32 15
No. of Words: 478 350
No. of Characters: 2149 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.676 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.496 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.417 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.154 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.469 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.245 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 242, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...vel far distances without rest and some cant even swim through waters. Hence, our re...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...on letters and telegrams. Life as it is became easier. Lastly, the most important wa...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...trial and error of may doctors, we have improve ways to induce anesthesia, perform proc...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
...be seen as superior. For example, they can can calculate big numbers such as a calcula...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that none of these things are possible if it werent for the human mind. It is ...
^^
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...one of these things are possible if it werent for the human mind. It is true that ma...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'machines'' or 'machine's'?
Suggestion: machines'; machine's
...es may have made our lives easier but a machines functionality is owed to the great mind...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214828897338 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.15969581749 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0855513307985 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0570342205323 0.0497285424764 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0684410646388 0.0444667217837 154% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121673003802 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0285171102662 0.0406280797675 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51864297291 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0399239543726 0.030933414821 129% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0893536121673 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266159695817 0.0249443105267 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114068441065 0.0148568991511 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2682.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 476.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63445378151 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292016806723 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21218487395 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13025210084 0.200843997647 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0798319327731 0.132149295362 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51864297291 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 219.290929204 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.917972919 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6194690265 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.875 23.380412469 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9208493915 59.4972553346 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8125 141.124799967 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 23.380412469 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.40625 0.674092028746 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 36.093487395 51.4728631049 70% => OK
Elegance: 1.28 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447694022216 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109010822657 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107083617144 0.077325440228 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.449869651392 0.547984918172 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15722583072 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142495837991 0.161403998019 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845929051915 0.0892212321368 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30212434992 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0631027584221 0.0692045440612 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283727230014 0.275328986314 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317593214752 0.0653680567796 49% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88274336283 348% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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