The writer advises investers to invest into Techcorporation satellite television to get high profits.He offers several arguments to support his statement.But many questions arise because the argument is based on some assumptions.Those questions need to be answered in order to decide whether the advice is reasonable.
The first question that arises is that Who wrote the recommendation? Was the writer related in any way to Tech corporation that he would be benefitting from it.If he was benefitting from Tech corporation suceess then it is highly possible that he will always recommend to invest in techcorporation no matter what.What was the credibility of writer?How good were his earlier predictions?If he was a credible adviser then only we can trust him with our money.
The writer cites the survey last year that indicated over eighty percent of respondents were dissatisfied with current satellite TV provider.Many questions arise here.What was the sample space of survey?How many customers were surveyed?If the sample space is small then we cannot draw conclusions from such a small survey.It can happen that in other surveys the customers were satisfied with current satelliteTV provider.
Other questions which arise are what are the reasons due to which the customers are dissatisfied? Does Techcorporations new venture solve those problems?If Tech corporation is not being able to solve those problems then it might happen that customers wont choose Techcorporation sstellite TV.
So the writers advice to invest in Techcorporation satellite Tv is unconvincing as many questions can be raised on the writers argument.These quetions need to be answered in order to evaluate the advice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260714285714 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.217857142857 0.15541462614 140% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107142857143 0.0836205057962 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0321428571429 0.0520304965353 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0428571428571 0.0272364105082 157% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110714285714 0.125424944231 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0428571428571 0.0416121511921 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.31504534941 2.79052419416 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0428571428571 0.026700313972 161% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0928571428571 0.113004496875 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025 0.0255425247493 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025 0.0127820249294 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1698.0 2731.13054187 62% => OK
No of words: 262.0 446.07635468 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.48091603053 6.12365571057 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.57801047555 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393129770992 0.378187486979 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301526717557 0.287650121315 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232824427481 0.208842608468 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.198473282443 0.135150697306 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31504534941 2.79052419416 119% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 207.018472906 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56106870229 0.469332199767 120% => OK
Word variations: 56.3909306143 52.1807786196 108% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.039408867 35% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 37.4285714286 23.2022227129 161% => OK
Sentence length SD: 127.673051829 57.7814097925 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.571428571 141.986410481 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4285714286 23.2022227129 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.724660767414 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.58251231527 586% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 67.5812431843 51.9672348444 130% => OK
Elegance: 1.41463414634 1.8405768891 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298260712196 0.441005458295 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119270562737 0.135418324435 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.072865691663 0.0829849096947 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.791712807823 0.58762219726 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.234735776506 0.147661913831 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164304137345 0.193483328276 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527734301178 0.0970749176394 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.217911844737 0.42659136922 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.051368422852 0.0774707102158 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187744941756 0.312017818177 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372149414919 0.0698173142475 53% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 14.657635468 27% => More topic words wanted.
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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