Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the big cities. Compare these places.
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been involved in a great struggle in finding a decent and convenient accommodation. In today's world, however, there exists a heated controversy as to whether one should live in the countryside or big city. While I can understand why some argue that it would be better to people to live in the rural areas, I believe that living in big cities can have various advantages to humans.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why some argue that living in countryside can bring different success to the residents. The most obvious reason is that they may assert that the countryside enjoy from a healthy conditions and lead people towards the healthy life. In personal perspective, they assume that access to healthy diet would play a significant role in achieving efficient mind and physical. Moreover, they claim that rural areas prepare a proper way to the residents to solidify the family basics. In this regard, they have an active interaction with together and create a great deal of contribution to solve their problems. In addition, small towns may provide an unmatched environment to thoughtful and considerate parents that nurture their kids and children in free-corruption atmosphere, as well as the children in this condition can pay attention to their demands without any tendency towards criminal events. That why, some people prefer to live in the countryside rather than a big city.
In spite of these reasons, I believe that people should live in big cities rather than small towns. First, advent of state-of-the-art technologies bring an unexampled situations for humans to pave the way to create a powerful communication with different people around the world so that they can supply their demand and problems without any waste of time in a blink of an eye. Those who claim that communication among people in countryside play an important role in achieving success, they fail to take into account that today's world is sum of different individuals with various races, while the rural residents are faced with limited people. Second, the city dwellers have access to the modern hygiene and healthy conditions and can find a proper medicinal solution by using experienced doctors, While people in rural areas have no access to these centers, as well as the lack of sewer plans in those areas are one of the important sources of delivering of virus and dangerous diseases for people. Finally, the city environment provide a proper conditions to elites to recognize their inherent skills and abilities, as well as the application of modern technology in the schools has prepared a suitable ambient for educational systems in the cities. In contrast, rural residents are deprived from these educational systems and children cannot have a good education.
In conclusion, although some might have a gravitation to living in the country side, I prefer to live in big cities because of preparing modern amenities, equipped healthy centers, and proper environment for children's upbringing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ever, there exists a heated controversy as to whether one should live in the countryside or b...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...he-art technologies bring an unexampled situations for humans to pave the way to create a ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'as well as', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259259259259 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.118518518519 0.158761421928 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112962962963 0.0866891130778 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0277777777778 0.046263068375 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0296296296296 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155555555556 0.118717715034 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0203703703704 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8295762558 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388888888889 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109259259259 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0259259259259 0.0209618222197 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00925925925926 0.0139019557991 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3050.0 2387.08602151 128% => OK
No of words: 497.0 408.028673835 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13682092555 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394366197183 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281690140845 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195171026157 0.174417080927 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138832997988 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8295762558 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476861167002 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 55.0987217982 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 29.2352941176 20.5533526081 142% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7470048032 48.84282405 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.411764706 120.699889404 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2352941176 20.5533526081 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 57.4043082022 45.7405998639 125% => OK
Elegance: 2.47368421053 1.45489161554 170% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483534717299 0.300154397459 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160484305111 0.103427244359 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107031350234 0.0752933317313 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55941026394 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162547938403 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226089797586 0.114077575197 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113592916247 0.0781384742642 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.50368516832 0.336927656856 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0976822373563 0.067059652881 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.395857241501 0.210909579961 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368738006709 0.0618886996521 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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