Why do you think, people attend college or university?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...me university, not regarding their age. Even if it is hard to enter a university the nu...
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...sity? There are many reasons for that. One of the reasons is a social experienc...
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...e of the reasons is a social experience.A university is a diverse environment.The...
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...e.A university is a diverse environment.There are plenty of students from all over th...
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...nty of students from all over the world.It is a good place to get international fr...
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...s, to learn other cultures. For example, when I was a student I met many people f...
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... countries like Malaysia, Mexico, Russia,Turkey,Mongolia,America and etc. After the gra...
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Suggestion: , America
...Malaysia, Mexico, Russia,Turkey,Mongolia,America and etc. After the graduation, we get b...
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... Mexico, Russia,Turkey,Mongolia,America and etc. After the graduation, we get back to ou...
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...raduation, we get back to our countries.But we didn’t cut our connection. We are st...
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...our connection. We are still in contact.I can easily say that I have friends in e...
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Suggestion: They
...ve friends in every corner of the earth.They can organize trip if I decide to visit ...
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...anize trip if I decide to visit them. The second reason is a career. In univer...
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... which are useful to your future career.You can meet there your future colleagues.F...
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...u can meet there your future colleagues.For example, some of my friends get invitat...
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...get invitations to work with professors.After graduation, they become colleagues with...
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...hey become colleagues with professors. And the last but not the least reason is...
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...t but not the least reason is knowledge.The job market is competitive.In order to g...
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...knowledge.The job market is competitive.In order to get a job with a good salary, ...
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...rea. As a sum, I can say that these main widespread reasons to attend college or ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'for example']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264591439689 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.151750972763 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0778210116732 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0311284046693 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0778210116732 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0972762645914 0.118717715034 82% => OK
Participles: 0.00778210116732 0.0351676179071 22% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.54097883169 2.67179642975 133% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0428015564202 0.0309702414327 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933852140078 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194552529183 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011673151751 0.0139019557991 84% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1385.0 2387.08602151 58% => OK
No of words: 228.0 408.028673835 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07456140351 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48200974243 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324561403509 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236842105263 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179824561404 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140350877193 0.112833075102 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54097883169 2.67179642975 133% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 59.724684557 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4386891069 48.84282405 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.54480286738 361% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.6842105263 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.41791044776 1.45489161554 97% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174792742166 0.300154397459 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0822752027381 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0654817713717 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.506382735409 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207001343466 0.151897553556 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111037399272 0.114077575197 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216092705767 0.0781384742642 277% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.261025965152 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0132460983209 0.067059652881 20% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135159051485 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111784250348 0.0618886996521 181% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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