Our world is full of enigmatic and interesting things which in reality can be explained by the simplest of the principles.
Lets take the example of Sir Issac Newton. How did he propose the universal law of gravitation. His first observations was a falling apple, which gradually deepened his interest in this field. But, the start/idea was observing banal and commonplace things.
To exemplify my point, the Darwin's Theory of evolution was proposed by his observations of the interdependence in the nature. Why a species survived better than other. How did it adapt to the environment.These were not things which were very esoteric or very hard too see. But, his passionate research further led to new discoveries which were milestones in the field of evolution.
These examples may sound very scientific and one may believe that these people were geniuses, so I would like to say about Bill Gates, or Mark Zuckerberg. These eminent personalities gave their efforts to solve the most basic challenges of life, like how to connect the world socially, which evolved into tech giants like Microsoft and Facebook.
I am not denying that ideas don't come put of things which are more convoluted or beyond the scope of a common person, surely our scientists and researchers are focusing on these areas, however the starting points are the very basic needs of humanity.
I would like to say something about Mahatama Gandhi, who is the Father of my Nation India. His and the other revolutionaries consistent efforts brought an end to the colonial rule in India. He led a simple life with simple but powerful ideologies of non violence and ahimsa. His focus on the common problems of the peasants and the poor gave rise to a national freedom struggle.
One could not imagine talking to someone thousands of miles away, 50 years ago, but with the advent of advances in communication and networking this has been possible. Mobile phones have become so handy and popular.These things have been possible because of the persistent efforts by humanity in solving these problems. To end I would say that if we give a definite direction of thought towards even the basic things, the advanced ones will eventually be solved.
- The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting you 58
- The following recommendation appeared in a memo from the mayor of the town of Hopewell."Two years ago, the nearby town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel. During the past two years, tourism in Ocean View has increased, new bu 50
- Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reas 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253101736973 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.143920595533 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0942928039702 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471464019851 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0471464019851 0.0444667217837 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111662531017 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.029776674938 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81886709289 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272952853598 0.030933414821 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0967741935484 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198511166253 0.0249443105267 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0272952853598 0.0148568991511 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2226.0 2732.02544248 81% => OK
No of words: 370.0 452.878318584 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01621621622 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351351351351 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272972972973 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183783783784 0.200843997647 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.124324324324 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81886709289 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602702702703 0.48968727796 123% => OK
Word variations: 71.9807797125 55.4138127331 130% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4736842105 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6464113037 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.157894737 141.124799967 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4736842105 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.315789473684 0.674092028746 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.7709815078 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.65625 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33911852349 0.391690518653 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0647686105173 0.123202303941 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0451266392799 0.077325440228 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573596822275 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191493355298 0.149214159877 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13631892823 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658211018218 0.0892212321368 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.258208274864 0.385218514788 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0567332348701 0.0692045440612 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211284103042 0.275328986314 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409255075468 0.0653680567796 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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