Sometimes people compare about how hard life now and in several previous years. Nowadays, people are being helped by the advanced of technology while almost every thing was conventional when our grandparents were children. I pretty agree with the statement that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. Two most essential reasons for that statement are about communication and access.
First of all, just imagine our grandparents when they are young. They had no cellphone to interact with other people in a distant place. Indeed, communication is grow really fast. We now could talk to each other even in different country. Moreover, Internet give big benefit in communication by providing application that make you possible to see each other in different place. Nowadays, there is an electronic mail that replace the role of conventional mail. Electronic mail is much faster and easier than conventional mail.
Secondly, the Internet creates facility that provide all access in just one personal computer. Today, the access of education, news, and even bureaucracy are easier to get. I experienced paying my car tax from just using Internet. It only took 10 minutes to finish it. When I am in hurry, I just use my cellphone to get an electronic newspaper. One most important aspect is the access of education. A lot of information and data in Internet that can be used for our education behalf. We can even school or take a course in home just using the Internet. There is no reasons for people today to say that education is an expensive thing.
To sum it up, I agree that today almost every thing is easier compared to our grandparents life when they are young. Technology is a thing that makes communication and access are easier and help people in every aspect of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...distant place. Indeed, communication is grow really fast. We now could talk to each ...
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Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are no reasons'?
Suggestion: There are no reasons
...course in home just using the Internet. There is no reasons for people today to say that education ...
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p people in every aspect of their life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230994152047 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.154970760234 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0964912280702 0.0866891130778 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0701754385965 0.046263068375 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0672514619883 0.0685040099705 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.093567251462 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0233918128655 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7921395366 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00292397660819 0.00188951952338 155% => OK
Determiners: 0.0730994152047 0.0887237588012 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00877192982456 0.0209618222197 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0321637426901 0.0139019557991 231% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1841.0 2387.08602151 77% => OK
No of words: 309.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95792880259 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339805825243 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229773462783 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184466019417 0.174417080927 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148867313916 0.112833075102 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7921395366 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511326860841 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 51.8207330516 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0454545455 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8402912034 48.84282405 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6818181818 120.699889404 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0454545455 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 37.0228008238 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.19 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296845100412 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111135819801 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.133991030673 0.0752933317313 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.418785985215 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134656819552 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979148398562 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135651562466 0.0781384742642 174% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.261058548791 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0400970833662 0.067059652881 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21810115355 0.210909579961 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125120735904 0.0618886996521 202% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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