Long distance flights use more fuels than cars and pollute the environment. We should discourage non-essential flights instead of limiting the use of the car. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental pollution caused by long-term human activities has already become a headache for governments and people worldwide. Some people suggest that reducing unimportant long distance flights may be an effective way to reduce greenhouse gas emission. While it is a good idea, I believe that other measures like restrictions on private car use should also be applied.
First of all, we have to admit that there is a higher possibility of reducing unimportant flights thanks to the rapid development of instant messaging and mobile networking. Necessary face-to-face business communications in the past are substituted by telecommunications and things are settled online or through telephones. This means business men no longer need to take a long-distant flight to meet their clients, thus decreasing the demand of long distance flights.
However, in economic and cultural respect, it may take a lower price to reduce private car use than to discourage long distance flights. This is because plane is the most convenient and fastest way for long-distant travels and can hardly be replaced. Therefore, there exist risks of a recession in industries which are highly connected to flights, such as tourism. In comparison, the limitation of car use has some remedies - citizens can choose public transits or carpool, which is much more eco-friendly and also convenient.
Based on the arguments above, we can see the advantages of both discouraging non-essential flights and car use. In conclusion, it is too definite to discourage non-essential flights at the expense of limitation on car use. In reality, only by a proper combination of the two measures and applications of other means such as exploiting clean energy and developing high technology which can be applied for renewable resources can we ensure a better environment with a slightest impact on the development in other fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ore eco-friendly and also convenient. Based on the arguments above, we can see...
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...can we ensure a better environment with a slightest impact on the development in ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263157894737 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.148606811146 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12693498452 0.0946595960268 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046439628483 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0247678018576 0.0437548338989 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123839009288 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.046439628483 0.0403226058552 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.21704288027 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278637770898 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.077399380805 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247678018576 0.021408717616 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00928792569659 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1897.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36577181208 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412751677852 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328859060403 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.268456375839 0.203846283523 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181208053691 0.137316102897 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21704288027 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60067114094 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.4852980649 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9230769231 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7233149823 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.923076923 127.492653851 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 55.8089829633 49.1944974215 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.97183098592 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436044525241 0.332605444948 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104444600868 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0802644263362 0.0668466124924 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.544093533291 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0876368177758 0.148594505496 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174264758579 0.134430193775 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992216926548 0.0742795772207 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272731514825 0.324371583561 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0979703962017 0.0638462369009 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273268119577 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955082332447 0.058150111329 164% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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