Nowadays, thanks to progress in the various forms of transportation systems, people have a growing appetite, compared to the last decades to take a trip. While some people are of the opinion that traveling solely can benefits themselves a lot, others believe that group-excursion led by tour guide is the most effective method for having fun. To the best of my knowledge, group-travel has a myriad advantages based on the following concerns.
The first point to support this is that tour guides are likely to have an adequate and accurate account for each ancient monument or natural resort. Due to this fact that they have acquired precious knowledge either by studying the history of the relevant resorts or seeking for common anecdote, tour-leaders always can be an authentic resource for exploring novelty in each magnificent landscape. Compared to traveling alone, not only does it seem time-consuming to find the most important or beautiful resorts, but also there is little room that people can obtain accurate information about those places. For example, Persepolis has been regarded as the most ancient remnants of Iranian's ancestors. However, its aesthetic cannot be comprehend unless a knowledgeable leader explain its background.
Another justification for traveling in group is that it has provided a wide range of facilities for its users. In fact, since the expenditures of the excursion included renting a room in a hotel, having different meals or other facilities have to divide among members' group, joining to a group is known as a cost-effective option. Furthermore, travel in remote areas is required safety. Therefore, the possibility of being exposed to dangerous situation such as being victim of robbery or getting miss in unfamiliar ambient have reduced by traveling in groups.
Apart from those benefits, any individual can benefit through taking a trip lonely. Firstly, solo traveler should be liable for all the occurrences during the trip such as seeking for precious resorts or accommodating a room and to name but a few. Consequently, not only is it regarded as a best chance for discovering oneself but also it can enhance self-dependence skill. Since abroad students, for example, starts their independent lifestyle, they might can stand on their own feet. In addition, travelers can experiences getting familiar with strangers or flexible schedule. In fact, it is unfair to say that it does not have redeeming feature.
From what have been discussed, purpose of traveling is a critical point to travel either alone or by a group. As it was stated, accompanied by a tour leader can help visitors to have deep understanding about sites and have a cost-effective trip. Nonetheless, traveling alone cause one to be more mature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...f the opinion that traveling solely can benefits themselves a lot, others believe that g...
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Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...onsequently, not only is it regarded as a best chance for discovering oneself but...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215447154472 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.182926829268 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103658536585 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0548780487805 0.046263068375 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0345528455285 0.0685040099705 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128048780488 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0792682926829 0.0351676179071 225% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.01211857856 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0345528455285 0.0309702414327 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0914634146341 0.0887237588012 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0223577235772 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0020325203252 0.0139019557991 15% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2771.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 444.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24099099099 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40990990991 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317567567568 0.251872472559 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227477477477 0.174417080927 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153153153153 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01211857856 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 68.6090237156 59.2087087015 116% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1428571429 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4243975675 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.952380952 120.699889404 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 52.8996138996 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.55223880597 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31095452009 0.300154397459 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0747333559999 0.103427244359 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0558245482231 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47894847436 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14180355182 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107413019197 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687351999019 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.268392275166 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0741945662445 0.067059652881 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204264693479 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564035008979 0.0618886996521 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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