Title: You are looking for a part time employment. Write a letter to one agency whom you are applying for.
In your letter ( You must Introduce yourself, Explain what type of work you are looking for, Say what experienced and skills you have. )
Dear Ma'am/Sir
I am applying to register/apply with your agency as a part time teacher of the Alternative Learning System. I am now returning for a good, since the day I turned my back as an Alternative Learning Teacher of the City Division of Mati. I am now applying in your prestigious Division office, the Division of Davao Oriental.
Remembering those days, when I was an Alternative Mobile Teacher was quite good and. I am enjoying while learning, teaching students and guiding them with proper care and nurture. Alternative Learning Teachers caters Out of School Youth People, be it an adult or in a primary education. This is the best thing that our government definitely offers, a free education for all in connection with the Department of Education.
I am very much familiar with the core functions of the Alternative Learning System. In this work every day is an enrollment day. Hence we are making things possible for the students who really wanted to finish their studies both primary education and secondary. There are several of reasons of why some people did not finish their studies, such as far flung ares from the school, no money to spend on different materials needed in a class, a class project, and even a lack of guidance from the parents for their sons and daughters. This is the real reason why I am applying at your Division Office, in a sense that I have the heart to touch ones lives and continue pursue the student’s ambitions.
You can see my enclosed resume that I have the qualifications and edge among the applicants to be one of your Alternative Mobile part timer teacher. I can rest assure you that I will do my best to serve and give guidance to our learners for them to become a well-rounded individual in the near future.
In addition to that, you can contact MS. Paz Tacder for my character reference. She is the current Education Program Supervisor of the Alternative Learning System in the Schools Division of Mati City.
Please let me know whether you have any suitable positions for me in your good office.
I am looking forward for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Jan Matthew Pelayo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...to register/apply with your agency as a part time teacher of the Alternative Learning Sys...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Teacher of the City Division of Mati. I am now applying in your prestigious Div...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...is work every day is an enrollment day. Hence we are making things possible for the s...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 642, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... a sense that I have the heart to touch ones lives and continue pursue the student&a...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292682926829 0.220444632235 133% => OK
Verbs: 0.129268292683 0.167888034529 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0682926829268 0.0606518309736 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0243902439024 0.0506257000042 48% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0951219512195 0.118615021944 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121951219512 0.107062808482 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0317073170732 0.041066498444 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81935031613 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0219512195122 0.0385302599488 57% => OK
Particles: 0.00243902439024 0.00132118243153 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.107317073171 0.0714148451538 150% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00975609756098 0.0191574576366 51% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00975609756098 0.00930345855455 105% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2175.0 1141.60824742 191% => OK
No of words: 371.0 206.134020619 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86253369272 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 3.78085437643 116% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33692722372 0.284621296913 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269541778976 0.211203875043 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196765498652 0.133321485273 148% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11051212938 0.0843313296314 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81935031613 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 127.690721649 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563342318059 0.622163163488 91% => OK
Word variations: 63.9046413317 62.8969750728 102% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 12.9587628866 147% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5263157895 16.4300151701 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5284930458 44.7399317507 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.473684211 90.9928171075 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 16.4300151701 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.613754768223 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.09278350515 191% => OK
Readability: 46.480493687 37.5504026743 124% => OK
Elegance: 1.79411764706 1.13073093955 159% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221413764697 0.331212695627 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107227390048 0.0927372745006 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0956998924057 0.0736520305886 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.600730376974 0.579516596996 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202665076177 0.180689518051 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819336068326 0.122183219658 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592487711306 0.0765303033291 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.224148294198 0.211926503985 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0980828110237 0.0737400523855 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139015378413 0.203819188451 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433925330258 0.067151250289 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.0206185567 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 8.32989690722 156% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.458 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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