EATING AT RESTAURANTS IN CONVENIENT FOR MANY PEOPLE; SOME PREFER EATING AT HOME BECAUSE IT IS MUCH CHEAPER.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND OPINION
In today's world, many fast food chains are pop out of nowhere. From east to west, South to North. In every corner of the streets fast food chains really and definitely exist way back then. We can see different budget meals, items to be raffle, and even presents in different buffet places and restaurants, just to pleased and ask an attention of many people to dine in and being chill in their resto's.
Fast-food chains/restaurants has a huge impact to some people in many different ways such as hassle free of going back to their homes just to prepare for their own food. Least disturbing in which people now a days tend to consume their time and effort for their work or even bonding with their siblings, family and friends in a selected restaurants. That is the real principal reason on why people wanted to eat and buy their food in such restaurants. Yes, it's going to be helpful in such that ways.
However, there are still people tend to stay in their houses rather than eating conveniently in the restaurants and buffet places. In such reasons, the practical way of budgeting their money for their basic necessities in which food, clothes and shelter are their priority. Some people will say, they prefer to eat at their own glance in which they are comfortable and they really wanted to eat with their love ones at their own houses, the real Filipino values is being taught and said. While, others will say that they wanted to eat in their houses for this reason, the preservatives and different food additives is the reason of why people died at the age of 30-50 years of age is because of cancers, kidney malfunction, and even high blood due for wrong and misuse of oil. People who reason this is very much practical both his pocket and in his health.
As a whole, I would preferably choose eating inside our house, why? First and foremost, I am confident enough that the food that I am going to partake is safe and well cooked, no additives, fresh from the market, only a bit of spices and onions will be enough. We are the ones who are capable of ourselves. Healthy lifestyle is keeps our mind well worked and has a pace of mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Least'.
Suggestion: The Least
...mes just to prepare for their own food. Least disturbing in which people now a days t...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... food. Least disturbing in which people now a days tend to consume their time and effort f...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...d. Least disturbing in which people now a days tend to consume their time and effort f...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'restaurant'?
Suggestion: restaurant
...lings, family and friends in a selected restaurants. That is the real principal reason on w...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...uy their food in such restaurants. Yes, its going to be helpful in such that ways. ...
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Line 6, column 202, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... way of budgeting their money for their basic necessities in which food, clothes and shelter are ...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to eat'.
Suggestion: to eat
... As a whole, I would preferably choose eating inside our house, why? First and foremo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225352112676 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.140845070423 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100938967136 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0633802816901 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0680751173709 0.0437548338989 156% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12676056338 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0352112676056 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39425729627 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037558685446 0.0326793684256 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0610328638498 0.0861772015684 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117370892019 0.021408717616 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018779342723 0.011925033212 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2154.0 1933.35771543 111% => OK
No of words: 387.0 316.048096192 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56589147287 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291989664083 0.374742101984 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.15503875969 0.28420135186 55% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0981912144703 0.203846283523 48% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0801033591731 0.137316102897 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39425729627 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.037074148 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524547803618 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 57.9526507847 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7647058824 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1935808311 49.517814964 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.705882353 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.99599198397 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.2685818513 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.4224137931 1.69124875643 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236499276293 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113817899234 0.102741220458 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0939908750106 0.0668466124924 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.52647642825 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160077172439 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898051570275 0.134430193775 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541365747151 0.0742795772207 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422623553859 0.324371583561 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100289312213 0.0638462369009 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152451056218 0.228012699653 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586081610917 0.058150111329 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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