Question: Your friend is an expert in international food and is going to publish a book soon. Write a letter to him describing a special dish from your country. In your letter you should:
• describe a special dish from your country
• explain what season people prefer to eat it in
• say why your friend should include this dish in his book
Dear Joanne,
How are you there? I just wanted to congratulate you for being great there or we can just simply say for being too popular in a way abroad. I am very much proud of you as your childhood friend. It seems that you're very much popular there in the field of Hotel and Restaurant Industry.
I've heard and definitely seen your name in an International News that you're on your way of publishing International Cuisine Book. How I wish that our paths will really do cross. Since, I just want to propose/share to you this one of the special cuisine of my family.
I'd hope someday that you will be given me a chance to let me share this dish/recipe of my family. This is surely one of a kind dish that you will really love too. This menu/dish is an all-time favorite of my family. My brother learned and specialized this dish as if he really proved that it is worth craving for. This dish entitled “Chicken Soya" This recipe is definitely for all seasons too. The main ingredient of this dish is Chicken that is why I can assure that this is “a food for all/food for all seasons be it Muslims or Christians they can really freely partake this . It is a mixture of spicy and sweetness, chicken meat is so tender and soft. It has everything that you will love and crave for.
I am hoping that this recipe/dish will be in the list of International Cuisine Book of yours.
I am looking forward to to see you personally, soon.
All the best,
Jan Matthew U. Pelayo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joanne, How are you there? I just wanted to cong...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sh that our paths will really do cross. Since, I just want to propose/share to you th...
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Line 7, column 500, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
... is why I can assure that this is 'a food for all/food for all seasons be it Musl...
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Line 7, column 599, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ians they can really freely partake this . It is a mixture of spicy and sweetness,...
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Line 10, column 22, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ne Book of yours. I am looking forward to to see you personally, soon. All the be...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'really', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209375 0.220444632235 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.15625 0.167888034529 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.040625 0.0606518309736 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.071875 0.0506257000042 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.115625 0.118615021944 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115625 0.107062808482 108% => OK
Participles: 0.03125 0.041066498444 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66497589898 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.01875 0.0385302599488 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.078125 0.0714148451538 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025 0.0191574576366 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.009375 0.00930345855455 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1515.0 1141.60824742 133% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.134020619 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52919708029 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78085437643 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277372262774 0.284621296913 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20802919708 0.211203875043 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.109489051095 0.133321485273 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0912408759124 0.0843313296314 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66497589898 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529197080292 0.622163163488 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.2652725661 62.8969750728 83% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 12.9587628866 139% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2222222222 16.4300151701 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5850031636 44.7399317507 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 90.9928171075 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 16.4300151701 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 0.613754768223 36% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.09278350515 239% => OK
Readability: 36.0251419303 37.5504026743 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.03636363636 1.13073093955 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218350630505 0.331212695627 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143375990524 0.0927372745006 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106636647705 0.0736520305886 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.584345512349 0.579516596996 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216464451316 0.180689518051 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818984992618 0.122183219658 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050971416264 0.0765303033291 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.166949894271 0.211926503985 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122138893369 0.0737400523855 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116236230249 0.203819188451 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626862168202 0.067151250289 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.45360824742 228% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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