You ordered an item on a company website, which should have been delivered the next day, but it never turned up. Write a letter to the manager and say
– what was the item
– why it was important that you get it immediately
– what you suggest the company should do now
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the delay in the delivery of an Item I ordered from your company's website on July 17 2016.
The item is a blue female dress with order number 45678. When I placed the order, I chose expedited shipping and it was confirmed that it will be delivered the next day. It's been three weeks since then and I'm yet to receive the item.
This dress is so important to me because, I want to give it as a gift, during our 6th wedding anniversary, coming up in four days time, to my wife. She once wanted to purchase this same clothe, but couldn't, due to the cost and has never failed to tell me how much she loves the gown, that I had to save up for it. What more could be a befitting gift to a supportive wife, in this circumstance, than the thing she cherishes most?
In view of the fact that the event is very close, I'd like to suggest that you organization ships another of the gown to my address using DHL and expedited shipping. I am convinced that if this is done, I will get the order in time before the anniversary.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Okoronkwo Alfred.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19391634981 0.220444632235 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.167300380228 0.167888034529 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.041825095057 0.0606518309736 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0342205323194 0.0506257000042 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.106463878327 0.118615021944 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0988593155894 0.107062808482 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0380228136882 0.041066498444 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58364408009 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0494296577947 0.0385302599488 128% => OK
Particles: 0.00760456273764 0.00132118243153 576% => OK
Determiners: 0.0912547528517 0.0714148451538 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114068441065 0.0191574576366 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114068441065 0.00930345855455 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1183.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.134020619 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42660550459 5.53046319177 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.233944954128 0.284621296913 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.174311926606 0.211203875043 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123853211009 0.133321485273 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0917431192661 0.0843313296314 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58364408009 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678899082569 0.622163163488 109% => OK
Word variations: 77.5231435093 62.8969750728 123% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8181818182 16.4300151701 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7533262223 44.7399317507 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 90.9928171075 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.4300151701 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 37.2493744787 37.5504026743 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.07407407407 1.13073093955 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425171095166 0.331212695627 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100151019236 0.0927372745006 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06548717376 0.0736520305886 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.715689419995 0.579516596996 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172865366697 0.180689518051 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156941133589 0.122183219658 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095639366813 0.0765303033291 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.18957570452 0.211926503985 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0921230240388 0.0737400523855 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221060105053 0.203819188451 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112570364611 0.067151250289 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 90.56432198 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.