You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Talha,
Hope you are fine. I am fine with my family. This letter regards invite you to visit my new house.
As you know that, I have been living in old house for last 6 years. But now, I am going to vacate the old house and have moved to new house, which is located in BB street.
Due to some space constricts, the old house is not sophisticated for my family members. And the kitchen in old house also very small, which is not comfort for my wife. Next month, my parents will have been staying in my house. So surely, the old house having single bedroom is not sufficient for us. So I had planned to move a new house, which has one big bedroom, a big spacious kitchen and a common bathroom. The new house is comfort for my family.
I am very enthusiasm to invite you for my new house for coming friday and to attend the grand function, which is arranged in my new house.
Looking forward to see you in my new house.
By
Mohammed Aslam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...anged in my new house. Looking forward to see you in my new house. By Mohammed As...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193236714976 0.220444632235 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.169082125604 0.167888034529 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12077294686 0.0606518309736 199% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0628019323671 0.0506257000042 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.101449275362 0.118615021944 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0869565217391 0.107062808482 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0579710144928 0.041066498444 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.17010765975 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0386473429952 0.0385302599488 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0531400966184 0.0714148451538 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0048309178744 0.0191574576366 25% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193236714976 0.00930345855455 208% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 950.0 1141.60824742 83% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.134020619 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1912568306 5.53046319177 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267759562842 0.284621296913 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.147540983607 0.211203875043 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0601092896175 0.133321485273 45% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0327868852459 0.0843313296314 39% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.17010765975 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.622163163488 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6206477655 62.8969750728 71% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0714285714 16.4300151701 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5325002263 44.7399317507 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8571428571 90.9928171075 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0714285714 16.4300151701 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.613754768223 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 27.8255269321 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.01449275362 1.13073093955 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345776653088 0.331212695627 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152420142959 0.0927372745006 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112599347118 0.0736520305886 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.637610784258 0.579516596996 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18931556929 0.180689518051 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148732704886 0.122183219658 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113313657603 0.0765303033291 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355716955459 0.211926503985 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119605856257 0.0737400523855 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261397483409 0.203819188451 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522125653417 0.067151250289 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.56701030928 195% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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