Many people think that universities and colleges are just for studying and doing research. But I disagree with this opinion because sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries in universities and colleges. Sports and social activities gives many benefits that further more promotes in gaining knowledge by making ourselves physically and mentally fit.
First, sports teaches us cooperation, leadership and mutual understanding among teachers and students. That means it helps in all round development of personality which is not only necessary in colleges and university but also in real life. Thus sports help to lead a life properly.Sports also makes us fit to study and research. Suppose, if a student is only interested in studying and he/she studies at home forgetting about his/her health, he/she might suffer from diseases. Consequently, this affects in his/her study directly. So, I think sports is very important and it should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries.
Second, many areas of research works in universities and colleges include field study and experiment. For this, students need to be socially active which can be possible by participating in programs of social activities. Further more, social activities help us to lead a life properly with the people in our society and community. For example, my friend Binod has joined a youth club of our town which is teaching leadership and mutual cooperation. He has develop a great personality and inspires us to be helpful, cooperative and bold. These qualities are needed for students in universities and colleges.
Sports and social activities are important because they help to grasp the knowledge properly and wholly in universities and colleges by making students physically, mentally, emotionally and socially fit. Therefore, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sports
...hus sports help to lead a life properly.Sports also makes us fit to study and research...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...studies at home forgetting about his/her health, he/she might suffer from disease...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...adership and mutual cooperation. He has develop a great personality and inspires us to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271641791045 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.140298507463 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0985074626866 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0776119402985 0.046263068375 168% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0417910447761 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110447761194 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0328358208955 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96989016231 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179104477612 0.0309702414327 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0388059701493 0.0887237588012 44% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119402985075 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0089552238806 0.0139019557991 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1971.0 2387.08602151 83% => OK
No of words: 304.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.48355263158 5.86048508987 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.440789473684 0.338922669872 130% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.342105263158 0.251872472559 136% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.266447368421 0.174417080927 153% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.177631578947 0.112833075102 157% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96989016231 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.2366482196 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8823529412 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0192292458 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.941176471 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 52.092879257 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.59770114943 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486239070837 0.300154397459 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0981694228149 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0745989743621 0.0752933317313 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525978156045 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144609558002 0.151897553556 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217030001088 0.114077575197 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175537213825 0.0781384742642 225% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.384592617621 0.336927656856 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0112903986477 0.067059652881 17% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394545977753 0.210909579961 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13846396953 0.0618886996521 224% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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