Do you agree or disagree with the statement:
In twenty years there will be less cars in use than there are today.
In my opinion, next generation is more aware about environmental issues and cares more as we do about the planet. I believe that in the future people are more interested in using public transportation and vehicles that emit less pollution to air, which means I think in next years, there will be less single seat cars in the streets.
As I mentioned before, today kids that will be next generation's parents, are familiar with concepts such as Greenhouse Effect and damages to Ozone layer. They learn how our lives is effected by pollution we import into the air by making garbage and using our cars inconsiderably. The more knowledge they gain in school about these stuff, the less probability that they would be such careless citizens like us. As a result, it's conceivable they would consider the benefit of environment more than their own comfort and prefer to ride bicycles or use bus and subway instead of their own cars which leads to observing less cars in future streets.
In the other hand, today technology is so widespread that most of the tasks which people had to do physically, can be done virtually by means of internet, without any need to come out of sweet home. In fact, the modern era is so dependent to internet that most of the things cannot be done without it. We don't need to go to the bank to pay our bills or buy grocery, we can easily pay them by entering our credit card number in bank website, and similarly we order what we need in grocery store website and pay for it electronically. Undoubtedly things will be done even easier in the next years and our children will spend less time in crowded streets and heavy traffic.
In conclusion, I think in two decades less cars would be visible outside because our children are more careful when it comes to issues like health of planet earth and dangerous gases produced by cars. In addition, internet and technology will help to reduce the number of cars in the streets because they can make jobs be done much easier in some minutes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...out environmental issues and cares more as we do about the planet. I believe that ...
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Line 2, column 615, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...their own cars which leads to observing less cars in future streets. In the other ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...he things cannot be done without it. We dont need to go to the bank to pay our bills...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['similarly', 'so', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240932642487 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147668393782 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103626943005 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0466321243523 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0777202072539 0.0685040099705 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137305699482 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0284974093264 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50356164633 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310880829016 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0518134715026 0.0887237588012 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0310880829016 0.0209618222197 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020725388601 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2012.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 358.0 408.028673835 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62011173184 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284916201117 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201117318436 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139664804469 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0782122905028 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50356164633 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.3942648808 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 29.8333333333 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2941006706 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.666666667 120.699889404 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 49.9450651769 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.49523809524 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330568390231 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131066836431 0.103427244359 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0865294655136 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590956103044 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129491919184 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149238318542 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805919169268 0.0781384742642 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366487999161 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0329401976701 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239535196596 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472201510393 0.0618886996521 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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