the first chart below show how the energy is used in an everage Autralian household. the second show the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releva.nt
The given charts show us the consumption of energy in an Australian family, and the consequence of this energy use.
As can be seen from the first chart, the proportion of the heating is the major source of energy usage, accounting for 42%, the largest percentage compared with others. Following that, the proportion of energy domestic needs of water heating, refrigeration, lighting, other applications is 30%, 7%, 4%, 20%, and 15% respectively. The smallest proportion of energy use is 2%, belong to cooling.
Moving to the second chart, inspire of the largest usage of heating, it is the only one which has the greenhouse gas emission is lower than energy use, about 15 percentages. In the contrast, water heating is the main reason causes greenhouse gas emission. Proportion of water heating, cooling is 32%, 3% respectively. Especially, refrigeration, lighting, other applications is double increase 14%, 8%, and 28% respectively.
To summarize, heating is the major source of domestic needs, causes 15 percentage of greenhouse gas emission. water heating is the main reason of greenhouse gas emission.
- the first chart below show how the energy is used in an everage Autralian household. the second show the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons 78
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Water
... percentage of greenhouse gas emission. water heating is the main reason of greenhous...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'second', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.34375 0.268076937826 128% => OK
Verbs: 0.102678571429 0.116061578633 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0758928571429 0.0759168565197 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0223214285714 0.0366838410393 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00892857142857 0.0131127313244 68% => OK
Prepositions: 0.09375 0.155750635184 60% => OK
Participles: 0.03125 0.0379272487307 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07792539574 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0133928571429 0.0210936926555 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0892857142857 0.0948980150116 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00446428571429 0.00437022459523 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00446428571429 0.00967000014798 46% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1109.0 1161.00487805 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.9 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30113636364 5.90752243213 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409090909091 0.337110787985 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289772727273 0.247514529752 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232954545455 0.171178102325 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176136363636 0.112407865282 157% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07792539574 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 44.4453873812 49.3433353143 90% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9977380343 42.9750493124 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 135.714022679 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3 0.689975730869 43% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 46.5772727273 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 3.5 2.94281807926 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481083891377 0.418131533498 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.204459987125 0.181151798455 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0983935330221 0.0850326197045 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.6961857717 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.19455599801 0.157042692854 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259836472261 0.228904883108 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149914345033 0.108899403657 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.544314624603 0.367819155151 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0774887863894 0.0812612215331 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376655550378 0.316326947829 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084280307535 0.0921553760075 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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