Do you agree or disagree with the following paragraphs?
Most advertisements make products seems much better than they really are.
As humans living in a civilized society, the demand for more production increased; based on this decrement, the requirement for the advertisements’ enhances. As a result, the advertisements have an indubitable status in marketing. The advertisement and its accuracy have always been a controversial issue among the many people. While, some people may hold a view that they present the valid information data about the products; however, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that the commercial provides fake information to attempt the consumers. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons, which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first reason which gives adherence to my outlook is that the producers do not list the valid data about their products. Indeed, since the producers' aim of advertisement is to flourished sell; as a result, they do not provide the accurate information about their producers' failures. Even in a case, the put emphasizes on the merits of their products. Consequently, the advertisement company, which prepares the commercial based on this unfair, the ultimate message released by the company, is completely far away from the actual products. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the accuracy of this issue, is the example of the sock's company in my country. This company annually lists statistic about their production and the socks modern designs and colors; in contrast, it does provide no data about the socks' disabilities. Last year, the novel commercial about this company and its socks broadcasts in the media. The majority of people, who are deceived by its advertisement about the colorful pattern, purchase this product; however, after a while, there was a scandal about its failure in the resistance. Thus, this company just presents its advantages to impel the people, and the advertisements prepare this condition for the company.
The next reason embraced my idea is that the advertisement is shaped in the base of exaggeration. This exaggeration can be categorized in the two separate fields of claims and visuals. For instance, the vague acclaims such as the best, the unique taste, can easily persuade the consumers that product is the ultimate best option. However, it is solely a holistic, ambiguous phrase. If it is the best product, what characteristics make it best? Or, based on which comparison this product is nominated as the best product. About the visual overestimation, most of the posters and pictures depicted the products are modified by the software such as photos hopes. As a result, there is a huge gap between the real products and their advertisement. According to the noteworthy, intelligent survey conducted in my country, approximately sixty-nine percent of the pictures of chocolate commercials are edited by the photo shops.
To wrap it up, based on the all aforementioned reasons, one can logically draw the conclusion that the advertisement does not illustrate the realistic outline of the product. Since the company disguises the advertisement companies; in addition, the advertisement company exaggerates in their tasks. All in all, I firmly recommend that there should be a cogent observation in the whole process of advertisements, till the advertisement shows the accurate message of the products.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242424242424 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.121212121212 0.158761421928 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0845295055821 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382775119617 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0414673046252 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118022328549 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0255183413078 0.0351676179071 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23360390533 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0127591706539 0.0309702414327 41% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00159489633174 0.00188951952338 84% => OK
Determiners: 0.161084529506 0.0887237588012 182% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127591706539 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111642743222 0.0139019557991 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3426.0 2387.08602151 144% => OK
No of words: 539.0 408.028673835 132% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35621521336 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387755102041 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.324675324675 0.251872472559 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.250463821892 0.174417080927 144% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.166975881262 0.112833075102 148% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23360390533 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502782931354 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 60.6249695141 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.962962963 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3170921993 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.888888889 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.962962963 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 52.4304954305 45.7405998639 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.92063492063 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199249035188 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132620577807 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0811332389548 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564828794907 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134482077893 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867717871428 0.114077575197 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370387987572 0.0781384742642 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.622479903037 0.336927656856 185% => Paragraphs have same ideas.
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0290867409154 0.067059652881 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154789212112 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263444727819 0.0618886996521 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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