Some students prefer to live on campus in a dormitory. Others prefer to live in an apartment or house off campus. Which do you prefer?
Students have to choose one place for living during the study in University. There are two choices in front of students for selecting. Some students prefer to live on campus in a dormitory and some others prefer an apartment or a house at off campus. Both of them may have some advantages and disadvantages. Each student has some personal reason for choosing one of them to live. But, I personally prefer to live on campus in a dormitory.
One reason is that when I live in dormitory on campus, I have much time to study. I do not waste your time. I can go and come back to university easily and in less time. When I can`t do my homework, I can ask from my friends that I have there. Also, I can share my educational problems with my classmate in dormitory.
Another reason is that I can use the dormitory and on campus facilities. There is gymnasium where students can use there in more times. I can do sports in the evening when I have free time. When I live on campus, I do not need to use bus the transportation system for example bus, private car, etc.
Third reason that I can say is that I can catch more experiences. When I have relationship with my friends in dormitory, I learn how I behave with them. These experiences will be useful for my personal life in the future. I can make strong friendship with people who can be useful in other parts of my life.
In conclusion, I prefer to live on campus for the mentioned reasons. May be, other people like to live in an apartment or a house off campus. It depends on the personal interests. It can be a different experience.
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...ests. It can be a different experience.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'third', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219219219219 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.15015015015 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0510510510511 0.0866891130778 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.021021021021 0.046263068375 45% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.105105105105 0.0685040099705 153% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.138138138138 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.00600600600601 0.0351676179071 17% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.69079937873 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027027027027 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0660660660661 0.0887237588012 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.042042042042 0.0209618222197 201% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.024024024024 0.0139019557991 173% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1601.0 2387.08602151 67% => OK
No of words: 296.0 408.028673835 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40878378378 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277027027027 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.182432432432 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135135135135 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101351351351 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69079937873 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466216216216 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.2176344055 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 12.8695652174 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.8894867309 48.84282405 41% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6086956522 120.699889404 58% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8695652174 20.5533526081 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.347826086957 0.644075263715 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 31.1128084606 45.7405998639 68% => OK
Elegance: 1.3152173913 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453711805393 0.300154397459 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128892314189 0.103427244359 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0937805460843 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476472108687 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0984287883302 0.151897553556 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160380007351 0.114077575197 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198027180226 0.0781384742642 253% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249910544557 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0735561451472 0.067059652881 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292027951056 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186775902892 0.0618886996521 302% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 12.0 2.75985663082 435% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.