Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
I think there is too much violence in movies.
Nowadays, movies have become an integral part of human's recreations. Almost Every one spend at least 10 hours in week watching movies at home or cinema. For some people watching violent movies is an exciting thing, albeit others believe that there is too much violence in movies. Personally, I agree with the second group. My reasons based on psychological and social proofs.
From the social point, human is an imitating creature. For instance Babies imitate everything that they see in adults. Movies are very important resources to stimulate people. When a child sees violent and rough actions in a movie, it can create a desire in his Soul to recreate that action. Furthermore, such movies teach people to treat with each other with violence rather than pleasure actions or rightful way. Teenagers learn that, they can obtain want they want by using force. Thus we can see examples of violence increase all over the word. These dangerous actions can threat all nations and global peace.
Psychologically, these movies affect human's feelings and soul. In recent years, the great numbers of people complain from stress and psychological disorders. Experts believe that watching stressful movies have bad influences on humans psychological health. For example, every night that I watch a homicide or suicide moves, I cannot sleep until morning, and surely I would have nightmares. Thus, violent movies disturb human's peace and calm and have negative impose on their mind and soul.
As a conclusion, and in conjunction with the above reasons, bad consequences of watching violent movies can be seen in contemporary human's daily activities, because new movies carry toomuch violence in their contents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: all over the world
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ily activities, because new movies carry toomuch violence in their contents.
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'at least', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291262135922 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.122977346278 0.158761421928 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11003236246 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0291262135922 0.046263068375 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.042071197411 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129449838188 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0226537216828 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64838964604 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00970873786408 0.0309702414327 31% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0711974110032 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226537216828 0.0209618222197 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00323624595469 0.0139019557991 23% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1704.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 273.0 408.028673835 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24175824176 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.43956043956 0.338922669872 130% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271062271062 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179487179487 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0952380952381 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64838964604 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.524397521467 122% => OK
Word variations: 72.6288074834 59.2087087015 123% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3684210526 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.086962703 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6842105263 120.699889404 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3684210526 20.5533526081 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 41.4746481589 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 2.28333333333 1.45489161554 157% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249264124044 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0645397411023 0.103427244359 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0557975028184 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.411047845857 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181515387698 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768721901674 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738312290381 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.201012971883 0.336927656856 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0192759254682 0.067059652881 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174225458773 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790796137979 0.0618886996521 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.