Learning new languages other than one's own tongue language is, inevitably, an overwhelming experience by itself. Some people might have learned a foreign language in their own country. Others might have done it, in the country in which the language is spoken. Although both ways have their own advantages, still I believe that learning a language in the country where it is spoken is much more advantageous.
To begin with, learning a language in one's own country is beneficial. A person could enjoy the fact that he is learning about other countries language, traditions and customs, without bei...
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