You have lost an item of value on a train.
Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
• describe the item
• explain where and when you left it
• say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
Subject :- Missed an item of worth USD 50,000 on an Indian superfast Express train.
My name is Mohammed Aslam. I am living in North hold town in India. Actually, I lost an item of worth USD 50,000 on an Indian Express. The item is a gold necklace with diamond stones. I have a receipt of that gold necklace as a proof.
When I traveled from North hold city to South hold city on an Indian Superfast Express train, the junction named "East West hold" city, which is 500 km away from North hold city. I lost my gold necklace at 5.30 am, the time, when the train stopped at "East west hold" station. My PNR number is A20B2Z for your reference for this investigation.
I would like to favor action to find out my gold necklace as soon as possible. Most probably, I hope it might fell down from the suitcase. So the railway company could order the supervisor who are managing the cleaners to search the necklace in the train. If we could not find the necklace in this approach, we would survey the people who were got down in "East west hold junction" through the CCTV camera. It helps us to find out that, whether somebody stolen or not and can identify his/her face to catch them.
I hope Railway company would help me in this regard and analyze this issue in some other way as well.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Mohammed Aslam
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'if', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286689419795 0.220444632235 130% => OK
Verbs: 0.129692832765 0.167888034529 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0546075085324 0.0606518309736 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037542662116 0.0506257000042 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0716723549488 0.118615021944 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.098976109215 0.107062808482 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0170648464164 0.041066498444 42% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.45261744594 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0204778156997 0.0385302599488 53% => OK
Particles: 0.00682593856655 0.00132118243153 517% => OK
Determiners: 0.0921501706485 0.0714148451538 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238907849829 0.0191574576366 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0170648464164 0.00930345855455 183% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1394.0 1141.60824742 122% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.134020619 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62096774194 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290322580645 0.284621296913 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20564516129 0.211203875043 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141129032258 0.133321485273 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0725806451613 0.0843313296314 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45261744594 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.622163163488 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.6315307433 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5882352941 16.4300151701 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6521373767 44.7399317507 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 90.9928171075 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 16.4300151701 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.235294117647 0.613754768223 38% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 35.1527514231 37.5504026743 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.68571428571 1.13073093955 149% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350582053479 0.331212695627 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0726612982528 0.0927372745006 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100797864908 0.0736520305886 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522643007133 0.579516596996 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.236154896185 0.180689518051 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104557589219 0.122183219658 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073536395978 0.0765303033291 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.230715682203 0.211926503985 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0745492638251 0.0737400523855 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167729994402 0.203819188451 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691007493089 0.067151250289 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.0206185567 174% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.