Some people work only a few months a year and take the rest of the time off to do whatever they like. To what extent the advantages of this arrangement overweigh the disadvantage.
The trends in the way of doing jobs are continuously undergoing changes nowadays. Some people prefer to work short period and taking rest in the remaining time. However, the advantages of this trend depend up on the type of the job and the perception of the people who choose it, as it has both benefits and drawbacks.
To begin with, working for a short period of time and taking off has a great favor of flexibility in some conditions. It gives minimum risk of exposure to the adverse conditions of the workplace while offering job security. For instance, if somebody is working in Antarctica, f...
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Hai Sir ... Thanks for the
Hai Sir ...
Thanks for the replay..
I too have a doubt in that word..
How can i correct it
Instead of overweigh write 'weight'
Thanks
Tessy
overall excellent essay
overall excellent essay
Sentence: Since changes are inevitable in every field, let the people to make their own choice according to their perception, salary and so on, which decides the overweigh of advantages and disadvantages.
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