Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
From thousands of years human live in society. Human is part of society. Human can only survive in society. To make children good member of society there are two views given. One is that parents should teach children and other is that school is better place to learn how they become a good citizen. Both the views have their own importance. I will prove it on following grounds.
Firstly, in order to be good member of society children must respect elders. Children must have some qualities like good behavior, their communication skills, obedience, and some other qualities. By such qualities a ...
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