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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everything made has a purpose. Plants are made not just to provide us with food but also the oxygen that we breathe. A hammer is made so that we can fix a nail to the wall and hang in a picture. Similarly a zoo has its own purpose.
When I had gone to the zoo for the first time I was very hesitant. I had a huge fear of animals and birds and hated the idea of being around them. That one visit changed my opinion. It made me realise that animals are a part of our world. Without them the world wouldn’t be the same. It also made me realise that we must protect our environment so that we all can...
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Sentence: It made me realise that animals are a part of our world.
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Sentence: It also made me realise that we must protect our environment so that we all can live in harmony.
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