A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture. Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendations.
My country is always eager and on the lookout for setting up research facilities that bring about improvement in the country’s development. Any research would be beneficial for a developing country like mine. However in my opinion, it would be best to set up a research center in agriculture.
What drives my recommendation is fact that every day when I open to read the newspaper I read an article about people dying every day due to hunger. Despite the country’s progression in the past decade, the fact remains that there are many poor people living here. Most of them die every year becaus...
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