Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the quality of education in a country is to increase teachers' salaries.
Today, how to improve the quality of the education tends to be one of the most urgent questions left to government. From my perspective, making the teachers’ salaries higher is a good way to improving the quality of education.
Firstly, there is no doubt a greatly substantial increase in salary benefiting to teachers. It is common for an officer to devote herself or himself to the work which results from her or his salary increasing a lot. So is a teacher. They would be more likely to spend much time in studying the method of education. It is well known to them that, For instance, which methods would be better for students understanding the class? What measure should be taken to increase the students’ score?
Secondly, more people would take teacher’s job as their career, the competition of which could persist to improve the quality of education. Well-paid salary would attract a lot of people taking into the queue of teachers. As the number of teacher increases, competition among teachers will exist nowadays. Without being jobless, they have to use new-found method of teaching students lessons, and try harder to help students make much progress on their lessons. In this way, the quality of education would be improving on the way.
Admittedly, an increase in the teachers’ salaries could show some disadvantages and there are other methods of improving the quality of education. For the growth of teachers’ salaries, the education department would pay a large number of money, which would be burdened with a lot tuition from students. However, paying more money for better education is worth for students. Because paying a little money for bad education may be more wasteful.
To improve the quality of education, increasing salaries is not the only way but a efficient and direct way.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259259259259 0.229887763892 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.14245014245 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0797720797721 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.02849002849 0.046263068375 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.034188034188 0.0685040099705 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11396011396 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.045584045584 0.0351676179071 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.92240235697 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039886039886 0.0309702414327 129% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0997150997151 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.034188034188 0.0209618222197 163% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017094017094 0.0139019557991 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1843.0 2387.08602151 77% => OK
No of words: 301.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12292358804 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388704318937 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292358803987 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212624584718 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146179401993 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92240235697 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524916943522 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.3385002633 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7222222222 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9447368409 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 45.9581026209 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.04166666667 1.45489161554 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548597861985 0.300154397459 183% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13202569334 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.098016705903 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560197775131 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181312388503 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224835907148 0.114077575197 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131456263969 0.0781384742642 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330515979807 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0554131478333 0.067059652881 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.39985102642 0.210909579961 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805756468837 0.0618886996521 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.