“ Knowledge has a beginning but no end” Reflecting us that due to our modern society, every day there are many things new such as inventions, new software, and many types of researches. If anyone said that I have much knowledge and information that is considered as a lie since in our life, every day you will learn more and more due to advanced technology. The issue whether it is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one academic subject aroused much controversy between people with different ages, and different perspective. Some contend think that it is better for them to have knowledge in many subjects to gain a lot of information. However, in my opinion, I like to specialize in one subject due to each subject has a reasonable amount of knowledge to study and to be expert in your career since you acknowledge with all the knowledge about this field.
To begin with, “planning for the future because that is where you will spend the rest of your life” once said Martin Tawin reflecting us you have to plan which career you will attend. When you attend your college you have to specialize in one subject. Each subject subdivided into branch and sub-branch so it is considered as a reasonable amount to study, and focus on it. However, if you take more than one subject, you will get more distracted and can not focus on any of them. Studying one subject allow you to focus and study in deepen and maximize your learning skills; get involved in all branches, and absorb information easily. For example, If you study pharmacy school, there are many branches in this field such as pharmacology, pharmaceutical, medical branch, and pharmacokinetics, all of that needs a lot of efforts such as making many types of researches, studying hard, and be aware of all new in that field to be more all- a rounded. When you study one subject, you will be able to do a lot of internships every year in your schools to have a good experience.
In addition to the reasonable amount to study, any proper job needs one who has an expert in an specific field, not one who has only superficial knowledge. According to the example that I mentioned before Due to modern technology, scientists every day is making a new research to cure many diseases that were hard to cure it in the past. They are making a lot of experiments about that. Therefore, if you want to be good pharmacists, you will have to be aware of what the new is in this career such as new medicines name, drug-drug interaction, and adverse effects of many drugs. As in general, finding a good well decent job is requiring having a lot of knowledge, and to be aware of the new software and the new researches. However, if you study more than one subject, the schools do not give you deep knowledge about all subjects but give you a little information. So it is hard to become acknowledge in all of these subjects alone since they are many. Therefore, Studying one subject provides you the opportunity to spend more power on it to get much knowledge, and information since you are interested in it. As the result, you will be able to meet the society requirements such as a good efficiency, knowledgeable, and a lot of experiences. Thereby, you will contribute to the growth of the economy of our society.
On the other hand, many students think that it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects therefore, you will gain a lot of knowledge in many fields, and you will have a lot of experiences which lead you to acquire the most valuable life lesson that led you to get success within a short period of time. All the information that the people got it about many academic fields, it surely will benefit the person who had it on the long run.
As all things considered, it is true that studying many academic subjects has a lot of benefits since the student will a acquire knowledge and a lot of information that will benefit them in the long run but specify in one subject is better because you will be able to focus more and hel you to be skillful in your field.
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Essay evaluation report
Studying one subject allow you
Studying one subject allows you
scientists every day is making a new research
scientists every day are making a new research
Sentence: As all things considered, it is true that studying many academic subjects has a lot of benefits since the student will a acquire knowledge and a lot of information that will benefit them in the long run but specify in one subject is better because you will be able to focus more and hel you to be skillful in your field.
Error: hel Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 733 350
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 22
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 733 350
No. of Characters: 3267 1500
No. of Different Words: 251 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.203 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.457 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.593 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 200 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 152 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 107 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 73 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.32 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.01 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.64 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.507 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.248 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
' Knowledge has a beginning but no ...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch as inventions, new software, and many types of researches. If anyone said that...
^^
Line 1, column 843, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f knowledge to study and to be expert in your career since you acknowledge with a...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e to plan which career you will attend. When you attend your college you have to spe...
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Line 3, column 950, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...f all new in that field to be more all- a rounded. When you study one subject, you will b...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...oper job needs one who has an expert in an specific field, not one who has only su...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'new research'.
Suggestion: new research
...hnology, scientists every day is making a new research to cure many diseases that were hard to...
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Line 5, column 1323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e growth of the economy of our society. On the other hand, many students th...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t led you to get success within a short period of time. All the information that the people go...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the person who had it on the long run. As all things considered, it is tru...
^^^^
Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... lot of benefits since the student will a acquire knowledge and a lot of informat...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... lot of benefits since the student will a acquire knowledge and a lot of information that...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in general', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'it is true', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192874692875 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.151105651106 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114250614251 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0282555282555 0.046263068375 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0749385749386 0.0685040099705 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125307125307 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.02457002457 0.0351676179071 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7410783926 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0454545454545 0.0309702414327 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0896805896806 0.0887237588012 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0184275184275 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017199017199 0.0139019557991 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4136.0 2387.08602151 173% => OK
No of words: 734.0 408.028673835 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6348773842 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.20503932437 4.48200974243 116% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284741144414 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220708446866 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16757493188 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106267029973 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7410783926 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.361035422343 0.524397521467 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.958072981 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 29.36 20.5533526081 143% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9305220334 48.84282405 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.44 120.699889404 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.36 20.5533526081 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.4308446866 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.34782608696 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462174454783 0.300154397459 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160417635025 0.103427244359 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0810099744237 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540320219751 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153337690152 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206852382728 0.114077575197 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880030358267 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.557224670625 0.336927656856 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0489766966238 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352819798824 0.210909579961 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547779739451 0.0618886996521 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.6433691756 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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