Most countries develop their economies to improve the living standards. Some people afraid that, it will cause degradation of important social values. Do you think the advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
The developmental programs of a society bring with increase in living standards along with decreased social values. In this essay, I will explain why I feel the disadvantages of these changes overweigh the advantages.
Social values are important for a community as it provides equality and fairness. Most of the countries encourage immigration of skilled labors from different countries. It help the country in its economical developments. Lack of unity and co-operation between people in a cosmopolitan society, cause conflicts and creates problems in the host country. When the rights of the m...
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Sentence: The developmental programs of a society bring with increase in living standards along with decreased social values.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace bring with verb, past participle
Sentence: It help the country in its economical developments.
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Sentence: When the rights of the minorities are constantly neglected, it may leads to voice strikes and disturb the peace of the society.
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Sentence: In this essay, I will explain why I feel the disadvantages of these changes overweigh the advantages.
Error: overweigh Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Hence, I believe that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1721 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.395 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.969 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.765 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.708 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.543 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5