Hmm, It Seems to be that revenue currently being generated from the movies produced by Super Screen Movie have decreased compared to any other year.So advertising director is planning get more funds to advertise so that he can reach more people. The argument may seem plausible at the first glance , its based on several logical and statistical fallacies. We need substancial reasoning in order to go with the recommendation or to go against.
Fistly , Its very true that people are becoming increasingly greedy. I woud not be surprised if Advertising director is planning to get more funds to be allocated at his own disposal, so that he can make more commision out of it. Because Director thinks the reduction of the viewership is only because its not advertised properly . There may be several underlying conditions and the director does not even give them a slightest advantage. It may be the case that the movies that were released during this year were increasingly of bad content. Percentage of positive reviews seems to vague to be of any value. May be they were paid by the same exact director , either to fool more audience or to channel more money at his disposal.
It may also be case that positive reviews percentage increased because the Super screen produced more super hero movie or childish animes. Usually such cinemas tend to get more percentage of positive reviews than any other field. Or it was may be an adult comedy which tend to attract teenagers and mid 20 people. Who seems to enjoy such dark comedies and give positive reviews.
Next, it may very well be true that the production house produced a drama or may be a biography based movie which doesnt attract much of a young audiences. Because they usually tend to be monotonous and consists of plodding screenplay. It can be only enjoyed by people who are associated with the person, event on which movie is based on. The movie critics may very well be those people in the inner circle and like the movie and tender positive reviews.
Thirdly, the director without having enough evidences for the quality of movies , which is just based on percentage of reviews planning to advertise it much more . If it was very well advertised and if planning to increase it more without considering other aspects which cased low publicity for the movie the plan will not produce intended result.
if the production company indeed allocates greater budget , they may very well run out of money to produce quality content. Eventually, it will go on to become bankrupt. Whats the point of advertising then? We need to know if the prouction house really has money to produce content, then, if all the above assumptions if indeed fall in favour of the advertising director then the production company can think of allocating budget at directors disposal, Otherwise it can be futile.
- Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military. 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 54
- "According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies ac 50
- Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little. 60
- It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends. 70
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210727969349 0.25644967241 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.191570881226 0.15541462614 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0938697318008 0.0836205057962 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0747126436782 0.0520304965353 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498084291188 0.0272364105082 183% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.113026819923 0.125424944231 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0478927203065 0.0416121511921 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63929432616 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0402298850575 0.026700313972 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0727969348659 0.113004496875 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0306513409962 0.0255425247493 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.0127820249294 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2860.0 2731.13054187 105% => OK
No of words: 491.0 446.07635468 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82484725051 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.57801047555 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327902240326 0.378187486979 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270875763747 0.287650121315 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191446028513 0.208842608468 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114052953157 0.135150697306 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63929432616 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 207.018472906 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458248472505 0.469332199767 98% => OK
Word variations: 52.2408435664 52.1807786196 100% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.039408867 120% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4583333333 23.2022227129 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2352295422 57.7814097925 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 141.986410481 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 23.2022227129 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.724660767414 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 3.58251231527 502% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.5459097081 51.9672348444 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.17575757576 1.8405768891 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300363091812 0.441005458295 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0853594928034 0.135418324435 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0720111138514 0.0829849096947 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516184058075 0.58762219726 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162016650718 0.147661913831 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109938388663 0.193483328276 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631123999368 0.0970749176394 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.353958038399 0.42659136922 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0423877605167 0.0774707102158 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195611379043 0.312017818177 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474573852821 0.0698173142475 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.33743842365 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.82512315271 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 6.46551724138 155% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 14.657635468 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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