Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I certainly agree with the statement that life today is much easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. We are living in a 'global village' rather than a 'world' because of the kind of technical advancements that have revolutionized our lives. In fact, one can never think of going back and living in old age as we are used to so much sophistication. There are lots of reasons to validate that the life we lead today is much effective than what our grandparents had during their tough times.
First of all, we have many gadgets today that m...
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