Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Now, most of people decide stay with their friends or alone rather than with their families. This phenomenon has negative impact on society. I agree that people who live without their families will make uncomfortable their communities.
Firstly, a large majority of societies thinking about the people who stay without control with their families, it will make they become uncontrollable like comeback to home early morning and invite their friends to stay up together and make disturb their neighbor.
Secondly, living with friends or alone will be danger because without their families so no body to protect and control them. So if there is thief it makes the people in bad situation.
Finally, the people cannot live alone because they need people around them to help or keep if they have a trouble. And the most important for many people are family. So they should stay with their family in order to safety and make their neighbor feel comfortable to live close with them.
In conclusion, I think people should choose live with their families because it make people more safety and keep them from bad situation. So, it make communities cozy to stay near with them.
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most of people decide stay with their friends
most of people decide to stay with their friends
will make uncomfortable their communities.
will make their uncomfortable communities.
a large majority of societies thinking about the people who stay without control with their families,
a large majority of societies are thinking about the people who stay without control with their families,
it will make they become uncontrollable
it will make them become uncontrollable
will be danger
will be dangerous
And the most important for many people are family.
And the most important thing for many people is family.
Sentence: In conclusion, I think people should choose live with their families because it make people more safety and keep them from bad situation.
Description: The fragment it make people is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: So, it make communities cozy to stay near with them.
Description: The fragment it make communities is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2 //Some grammar issues. Read a good grammar book. You may read this one: http://testbig.com/question/grammar
No. of Words: 197 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 197 350
No. of Characters: 950 1500
No. of Different Words: 103 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.746 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.822 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.292 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 67 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 42 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.327 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.425 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.684 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.212 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
Now, most of people decide stay with their friends or alone...
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Line 6, column 89, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...anger because without their families so no body to protect and control them. So if ther...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so no body to protect and control them. So if there is thief it makes the people in b...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 45, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to live'
Suggestion: to live
...onclusion, I think people should choose live with their families because it make peo...
^^^^
Line 10, column 81, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ose live with their families because it make people more safety and keep them from b...
^^^^
Line 10, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...nd keep them from bad situation. So, it make communities cozy to stay near with them...
^^^^
Line 10, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ommunities cozy to stay near with them.
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'i think', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.180555555556 0.247107183377 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.175925925926 0.155533422707 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694444444444 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0694444444444 0.0501214627716 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.12037037037 0.0437548338989 275% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.148148148148 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.00925925925926 0.0403226058552 23% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.3860135976 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324074074074 0.0326793684256 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.037037037037 0.0861772015684 43% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0277777777778 0.021408717616 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00925925925926 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1186.0 1933.35771543 61% => OK
No of words: 197.0 316.048096192 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02030456853 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20517956788 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340101522843 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218274111675 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142131979695 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0761421319797 0.137316102897 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3860135976 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.037074148 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543147208122 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 48.3231453542 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9090909091 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6930663116 49.517814964 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 39.7365020766 49.1944974215 81% => OK
Elegance: 0.924050632911 1.69124875643 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392188626194 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147826464616 0.102741220458 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115529136068 0.0668466124924 173% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.624337383395 0.534860350844 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189043157072 0.148594505496 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173656234048 0.134430193775 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813230528731 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313030173667 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0598688136003 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249940077574 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07754698891 0.058150111329 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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